This is the very first ACADEMIC essay I have ever written in my entire life.
As you can see and read further on, I have basically got a long way to go in terms of academic writing capabilities. My approach to writing was rather "reflective" and very, crude and "unprofessional".
Well, when you are down, there is only one other direction you can go and that is up!
The topic was about drones and how their increasing use on modern warfare is one for good or for worse.
Enjoy. Haha.
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Drones are not all bad – but what if Isis starts using
them?
Drones are good, but only in the right hands.
Mary Dejevsky seems to think so and
also says cyber warfare is here to stay even if we do not like it. So, Drones
are the future of Modern Warfare. This wondrous technology could disintegrate
anything instantly, without ever stepping foot into enemy lines.
Modernized, accurate, safe (for the good guys) and dangerous (for the bad
guys). So, what’s the fuss about? Exactly. The killing of Mullah Akhtar
Mansoor, as controversial as it seems for violating Pakistan’s sovereignty, and
the lack of any reaction or questions from the world confirms what Dejevsky is
saying. Drones are now taken for granted, and I agree with her. The world seems
to be content with the given knowledge that those killed were “terrorist”. “We’re
saved!” or “Terrorists deserved it!” is all the pacification needed. Looking at
this report of the 150 “militants the US had killed in Somalia just recently
this March (G. Greenwald, 2016). All that was said is that they were Al Shabaab, and they were attacking
US personnel, without evidence but assumptions and hunches. There was no
official proof to back up the accusations except from US “officials”. However,
life continued and the world thought they were safe because the “terrorists”
were annihilated. “We don’t know who they are, but luckily they were all bad.”(G.
Greenwald, 2016, para 3) Statements like this show that we are a very ignorant,
malleable, naive bunch.
The Somali attack does raise concerns on
whether the US had jurisdiction for it. Furthermore, even with evidence of no
war between the US and Somalia and that Al Shabaab is focused on Somalia (G.
Greenwald, 2016, para 8), was there justification? Looking back at Pakistan,
Dejevsky mentions John Kerry justifying the attack because Mansoor was a threat to US personnel. She also
mentions of Reyaad Khan who was killed in Syria by Britain on the same grounds;
he’s a threat. Period. However, were they? And, as Dejevsky puts it, where is
the line between self-defense and murder by State drawn?
Hence, these attacks leaning towards
illegality is something Dejevsky fails to mention. From
above, no evidence is needed except the “credibility” of authority, in this
case, the US and Britain. An article by The Spectator (I. Hardman, 2015) tells
us no evidence for the attack or the legality was shared in Khan’s case.
Furthermore, it was made public only later that he was a threat to Iraq instead
(I. Hardman, 2015, para 3). So, was the ruckus about British defense just to
silence everyone on the illegal attack in Syria? The US is not at war with
Pakistan and Somalia (J. Keating, 2013), nor is Britain with Syria (E. MacAskill,
and R. Norton-Taylor, 2015 “How was the decision made” para 1). So, on what basis where these attacks given the green
light and without consent from the attacked state?
“Since 2001, the U.S.
government has legally justified its we-bomb-wherever-we-want approach
by pointing to the 2001 Authorization for Use of Military Force (AUMF)”
(G. Greenwald, 2016, para 8). “The
President is authorized to use all necessary and appropriate force against those
nations, organizations, or persons he determines planned, authorized, committed,
or aided the terrorist attacks that occurred on September 11, 2001, or harbored
such organizations or persons, in order to prevent any future acts of
international terrorism against the United States”(“ Joint Resolution,” 2001,
Sec 2, para 1) This does not justify
attacking Al Shabaab, who only came to existence after 9/11. Accusations of
“being a threat” are not justifiable enough without providing proof or grounds.
This also brings us back to how the world just takes for granted the usage of
these drones. It’s bloodcurdling to know they can just attack anyone, anywhere
and anytime without a reason but their own justification claiming “survival”.
Technology is perpetually advancing,
warfare included, says Dejevsky. Drones started with George W Bush however,
under Obama, their usage has more than doubled. (“Drones: What are they”, 2012,
para 5) And the list of countries incorporating them into their military is
rising steadily (C. Dillow, 2016, para 8). This shows how integral drones are
for modern warfare’s future. However, is it an unfair advantage as Dejevsky
suggests? She does however continue that it has never stopped countries in the
past to miss out the opportunity of advancement for fairness. Obsolescence is a
guaranteed by product for advancement with all its callousness and in all true
honesty, I do agree with her to some extant. Superior technology has always
been the forefront in winning and ending wars throughout history. Ethics, she
says is a double-edged sword with fairness, or your citizens and assets.
However, if we want to talk about ethics, were the attacks discussed above,
ethical? The emphasis that these countries are not at war cannot be made
clearer.
Dejevsky talks of the precise accuracy
of the drone capability and how it spares both civilians and fighters on both
sides. Though her mentioning of open questions still remains, I believe there
is evidence to suggest that both the accuracy of the drones and its “safeness”
can be disputed. Apparently, 90% of those killed in drone attacks are not the
actual targets (G. Greenwald,
2016, para 13 & M. Fang, 2015). From the words of a drone pilot himself, when “a missile fired from a
U.S. drone hits an area, bystanders rush to the scene to help the wounded, and
the drone, still overhead, kills the rescuers.” (C. Friedersdorf,
2016, para 8). Let’s not
forget Aleppo and Kunduz where hospitals were “mistakenly” targeted. The
severity of which I feel Dejevsky fails to emphasize. The many cases of “accidents”
like the wedding party in Yemen (H. Almasmari, 2013) and the tribal meeting in
Pakistan (“US drone strike kills 40”, 2011) are just a few of the countless reports out there. Both Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch published “reports
fiercely criticizing the secrecy that shrouds the administration’s drone
program, and calling for investigations into the deaths of drone victims with
no apparent connection to terrorism. In Pakistan alone, TBIJ estimates, between
416 and 951 civilians, including 168 to 200 children, have been killed.” (M.
Sledge, 2014, para 5). To add, the “killing anonymous men who appear to be associated with
terrorist or militant armies through observable behavior — comport with the
bedrock principle of distinction founded in international humanitarian law”(M.
Zenko, 2016) proves how unethical it has become. “Anyone caught in the vicinity
is guilty by association. A drone strike kills more than one person, there is
no guarantee that those persons deserved their fate. … So it’s a phenomenal
gamble.” (M. Fang, 2015)
shows how shocking their “justification” is.
No matter how accurate it may be, humans
are still the master puppeteers. And yes, humans make mistakes. There’s no
questioning the precise accuracy of drones, but whether or not we are "ethically"
safe from it, is extremely debatable.
Dejevsky argues the only reason ISIS and
other groups have not attacked with this technology is because they lack the
capacity. However, she also mentions of how the western countries are
developing counter measures for hostile drones. Why would defense measures be
necessary if she claims so? This is where Dejevsky has fallen short. The list
of countries acquiring drone technology is getting longer everyday. And with China
producing cheaper drones (C. Dillow, 2016, para 3), it’s only a matter of time
before everybody acquires it. And the West knows it.
Lastly,
another issue I disagree with Dejevsky is her stance of no risk to the
combatant. Every action has a consequence and the extensive usage of drones is
only going to have an adverse affect for our future. Drones will soon be a mainstay
and that will plunge us into endless nonstop conflicts (M. Mazetti, 2014). This
“downward-spiraling” possibility is a risk if drone warfare continues at this
rate, for both user and receiver.
To summarize, I believe Dejevsky brought
up agreeable points like drones taken for granted. However, to claim they will
fly freely till the “enemy” gets them is something that draws concern. I
believe international regulations and legal frameworks should be set now
instead of waiting for the gap to be narrowed. From my analysis above, it shows
that drones are causing more harm than good even in the hands of the “good
guy”. Moreover, at the rate at which everything is spiraling, I would not want
to stick around when the gap is narrowed.
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My usage of certain words like "blood-curdling" and how I'm very subjective and showing an inclination to a certain side and emphasizing it, are things that I need to take note of.
I've got a long way to go.
However, I really did enjoy CCO101!
One of my favorite modules so far.